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dianascearce
overall structure of the draft
Jul 6 2011, 7:51 PM EDT | Post edited: Jul 6 2011, 7:51 PM EDT
Hi All -

I think the draft is really coming together. I do think it could benefit from some restructuring- in particular the front end. Here's a possible outline:

#1 Intro - including sectionon "how network strategies and tools are increasing leadership impact"
#2 The challenge and the opportuniey
-- includes current section on challenges. Plus "why is there more interest in networks today"
[And, then the current structure...]
#3 Bringing a new leadership mindset to networks (call this out as the chapter head with subsections on core values and competencies0
#4 Supporing leadership in nets
#5 Conclusion
And, sidebars (including case studies) distributed throughout.

What do you think?

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eekim
1. RE: overall structure of the draft
Aug 7 2011, 3:48 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 7 2011, 3:48 AM EDT
I like this proposed new structure. I rewrote the intro to try and reflect that and also to be clearer about the focus, which I think are 3. and 4. in your list. I'll try reorganizing a bit more as well. Do you find this valuable?